Jutsu 'List' or jutsu 'registry'? Which is this? If it's your registry, please rename this thread appropriately and bump for modding. If it's your 'list', where is the registry and who approved any of this?

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Hiding in Water, Archerfish, Azure Stream, Gunshot, and Water Beast are approved.

Type refers to if a jutsu is Offensive, Defensive, or Supplementary. Fix that in all of your custom jutsu. We need a range given in meters here. If it only effects the body, the range is self; something like arm's length or the length of a normal weapon is melee; after that, or if it's an area of effect, we need numbers. Just give the maximum range the jutsu is effective at. Technically, these would be WT or Kyujutsu, not just locked to WT.

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Name: True Aim: Typhoon Twister Bender
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Kyujutsu
Element: Water
Range: Short - Long
Specialty: Weapon Tech
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Description: The user kneads water chakra into their drawn arrow and fires off an arrow covered in water chakra. The arrow has double the piercing power and with a more higher rotation meaning most thrown projectiles will not knock it off target and requires a B rank technique to knock it off course.

So what exactly is the piercing power now? Arrows don't normally rotate, they wobble in a SIN wave pattern, almost like a snake moving up and down. Is the arrow or the water surrounding it rotating?

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Name: True Aim: White Light Stream
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Kyujutsu
Element: None
Range: Short - Long
Specialty: Weapon Tech
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Description: The user fires off a high speed chakra enhanced arrow that speed and strength is treated as if the user was 1 rank higher.

No. Not for base C-rank cost. Maybe, if you where scaling this to cover all ranks from D-S, and paid the extra cost to get the boost. No C-rank jutsu can take an S-rank shot and make it SS.

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Name: True Aim: Restrictor Arrow
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short - Mid
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description:The user fires off a chakra charged arrow that when released the front half of the arrow expands and forms a chakra net that once on the target and restrain movements for that area of the body for 4 post if the target rank is equal to or less than the user or 2 post with someone with a rank higher than the user.

The net and capture is fine. The basic idea of the restrict is fine. The MAXIMUM you can hold someone with a jutsu like this at C-rank 3 posts. Period. If they're of equal or lower rank to the JUTSU, 3 post. 1 rank higher, 2 posts. 2 ranks or more above the jutsu, it won't hold them. We didn't allow it for the canon Temporary Paralysis Jutsu or Rope Binding, so we can't allow it here; all restraining jutsu have to follow the same formula with the same power scaling.

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Name: True Aim: Instant Death Arrows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short - Long
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: The user draws an arrow with their bow and releases a powerful arrow that after 10 meters will spread out and form basically a moving cloud(roughly 20 meters wide 10 meters high of 40 chakra arrows that deal D rank damage upon hitting their target. Extremely difficult to dodge between 10-30 meters away. Within 10 meters the user must have around 80 speed to dodge the original arrow itself.

The name on this is extremely misleading. I nearly slapped a giant 'No' just for that; until I read it. You're going to need to pay a higher chakra cost for the cloud effect, because even at B-rank, you can't have the base jutsu plus 40 chakra arrows for 15 chakra. Double the cost, and give the damage potential of the arrow hits. 20 meters by 10 meters wouldn't be a very effective cloud of arrows, unless you're using thousands of arrows; as you're looking at something that's roughly 66ft x 33ft, and that is a HUGE area to cover.

Done Bump

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Name: True Aim: Typhoon Twister Bender
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (5-15m), Far (15m+)
Specialty: Weapon Tech, Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Description: The user kneads water chakra into their drawn arrow and fires off an arrow covered in water chakra. The arrow has double the piercing power and with a more higher rotation meaning most thrown projectiles will not knock it off target and requires a B rank technique to knock it off course. The water rotates at a high speed around the arrow to increase piercing power to be able to break stone and go 4 inches into bone.

4 inches is automatic S-rank. Boosted power or otherwise. You should read over the water library to get an idea of how powerful water jutsu are at each rank; and water is the most powerful overall of the elements here because favoritism is awesome.

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Name: True Aim: White Light Flash
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (5-15m), Far (15m+)
Specialty: Weapon Tech, Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Description: The user fires off a high speed chakra enhanced arrow is covered in so much chakra that upon impact the arrow shatters and creates a burst of chakra that deals moderate concussive damage and can make non Taijutsu, Kenjutsu and Weapon Tech ninja fly back at least a meter or two.

This is better. how much concussive damage? Just bruising, or can it cause internal bleeding/broken/cracked bones? The shards deal how much extra damage?


Restrictor Arrow is approved.

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Name: True Aim: Instant Death Arrows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short - Long
Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech
Duration: 2 Post -30 Chakra
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: The user draws an arrow with their bow and releases a powerful arrow that after 10 meters will spread out and form basically a moving cloud(roughly 5 meters wide 5 meters high of 40 chakra arrows that deal D rank damage upon hitting their target(They can get up to an inch deep into the targets skin. Extremely difficult to dodge between 10-30 meters away. Within 10 meters the user must have around 80 speed to dodge the original arrow itself.

Again, better; but not quite there. Remove that speed thing; that's not something you set. D-Rank damage doesn't allow for 1 full inch of piercing; even with chakra enhancements. You're looking at more like 1/4th inch for d-rank damage. The cloud size is much better; still a bit big, but not excessively so, you'll actually hit things at that size. Still need the max range this jutsu is effective too. Just saying Short-Long doesn't mean jack; even if older jutsu are formatted that way with the meter range assigned.

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Name: True Aim: Typhoon Twister Bender
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (5-15m), Far (15m+)
Specialty: Weapon Tech, Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Description: The user kneads water chakra into their drawn arrow and fires off an arrow covered in water chakra. The arrow has double the piercing power and with a more higher rotation meaning most thrown projectiles will not knock it off target and requires a B rank technique to knock it off course. The water rotates at a high speed around the arrow to increase piercing power to be able to break stone and go 1 inch into bone.

Okay seriouslly, why is this arrow rotating? Rotating an arrow would send it flying off course; arrows don't spin, the wobble. 1 inch of bone? That's A-rank. C-rank can barely nick bone, let alone breaking into it. You cannot block a jutsu of higher rank than the one being used; I could have sworn I've said this before somewhere; likely in the chatbox where it got scrolled away; but this is still valid.

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and can make non Taijutsu, Kenjutsu and Weapon Tech ninja fly back at least a meter or two.

Remove that from White Light Flash and it's approved.

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Name: True Aim: Instant Death Arrows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Long(15m+)
Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech
Duration: 2 Post -30 Chakra
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: The user draws an arrow with their bow and releases a powerful arrow that after 10 meters will spread out and form basically a moving cloud(roughly 5 meters wide 5 meters high of 40 chakra arrows that deal D rank damage upon hitting their target(They can get up to an 1/4 inch deep into the targets skin. Extremely difficult to dodge between 10-30 meters away. Within 10 meters of the user the initial arrow is next to impossible to dodge by more slower ninja

Why is this now 2 posts with an additional chakra drain? Did I miss something? Remove the dodge thing entirely; I told you this already.

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Name: True Aim: Swallow's Dance

Canon/Custom: Custom

Rank: B-S

Type: Supplementary

Element: None

Range: Self

Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech

Duration: -10 Chakra each post

Cooldown: 5 posts

Description:The user cloaks their body in a invisible coat of chakra that negates all resistances on the users body that slows down the user(Drag, Gravity,etc) to increase the user and the users weapon speed and agility dramatically. Arrows fired from the user are unaffected by C rank(At A rank this becomes B and at S rank this becomes A rank) or lower Wind and Projectile/Shurikenjutsu Techniques. The users speed is increased by to +20 Mph(+30 at A rank and +40 at S rank) and the user basically glides across land now.

You can't use this yet; because the highest rank is S and not B. With scaling rank jutsu, what determines if you can have it is if you can learn the highest rank; the only exception to this rule is with clan jutsu.

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Name: True Aim: Flight of 100 Swallows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short (0-5m)
Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: Swallow Dance must be active. The user quickly encircles the target moving so fast that a strong gale hides the users true location in the gale. While the gale is whipped up around the target while the user fires 100 hundreds arrows from all directions from the gale in 1 post assaulting their opponent and overwhelming them. To leave the gale requires at least a B rank attack though it should be mentioned that the user is also assualting them with arrows so it would be nigh impossible to leave unharmed. The users arms are severally weakened for the next 3 posts after this technique

How many arrows? Are the physical arrows or chakra arrows?

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True Aim: Diving Arrow is fine overall; but I gotta say, it's kind useless if it ONLY works in bodies of water, at least until we open up a water/sea village. Otherwise, it is approved.

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Name: True Aim: Swallow's Dance

Canon/Custom: Custom

Rank: B

Type: Supplementary  

Element: None

Range:  Self

Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech

Duration:  -10 Chakra each post

Cooldown: 5 posts

Description:The user cloaks their body in a invisible coat of chakra that negates all resistances on the users body that slows down the user(Drag, Gravity,etc) to increase the user and the users weapon speed and agility dramatically. Arrows fired from the user are unaffected by C rank or lower Wind and Projectile/Shurikenjutsu Techniques. The users speed is increased by to +20 Mph and the user basically glides across land now.  

So... basically this is now a weaker version of the Salamander tech, with a speed boost? Okay, that in itself isn't a bad thing; however your description is misleading. Wrapping yourself in water isn't going to cut down on drag for one, screw gravity; you only get a counteraction to gravity underwater when their is enough water pressure to give you the bounancy you need. Even then, it's not truly counteracting gravity, it's just making it feel like it is. A thin layer might take some pressure off your body; but your overall weight and such is still going to skyrocket because water itself is extremely heavy. You'd be better off just coating the bow and firing arrows made entirely of water chakra to get the same effect with less hassle; because as it stands, you're about to have to boost the chakra cost for this jutsu to double what it is now.

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Name: True Aim: Flight of 100 Swallows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range:  Short (0-5m)
Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: Swallow Dance must be active. The user quickly encircles the target moving so fast that a strong gale hides the users true location in the gale. While the gale is whipped up around the target while the user fires 100 hundreds arrows from all directions from the gale in 1 post assaulting their opponent and overwhelming them. To leave the gale requires at least a B rank attack though it should be mentioned that the user is also assaulting them with arrows so it would be nigh impossible to leave unharmed.  The users arms are severally weakened for the next 3 posts after this technique.

So this is basically now a jutsu that creates a whirlwind around the target via the user's movement speed, traps them inside while firing arrows inward, and causes damage to them if they try to leave? Or am I missing something? This sounds.... really dangerous to the user; given you're basically firing projectiles at yourself if you are the reason the gale is being maintained, and if it takes B-rank power/jutsu to escape, you're looking at something that's going to cause damage on it's own. How and why does this leave the user weakened? Where are you getting all of these arrows from? You have GOT to say if the arrows you're firing are physical arrows, or generated using chakra.

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Name: True Aim: Swallow Twirl
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range:  Self
Specialty: Kyujutsu, Weapon Tech
Duration: up to 3 posts -10 per post active.
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: Swallow Dance must be active. The user quickly spins on the heels of their feet like a top and unleashes a barrage of 20-30 chakra arrows per post in all directions randomly while spinning on their heels. The next post after the user uses this move will be them completely dizzy and off balance.

AGAIN: physical or chakra based arrows. WHICH IS IT? Why are you suffering effects from this jutsu? At B-rank, that's not needed, and overall doesn't make sense. You are NOT getting that many arrows for only 10 chakra per post. This should either be a straight chakra drain, or a set post count duration.


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