Name: Borun, the walking Dirge
Age: 34
Birthdate: 28th April
Gender: Male
Rank: C Rank
Village: Wanderer
Clan: Genshi
Element(s): Doton
Specialities: Medical Jutsu, Ninjutsu
Special Characteristics:

Warpath:

Dissociative Identity Disorder:

Height: 5’9 when standing up fully
Weight: 100Lbs
Hair Color: -
Eye Color: Amber
General Description: Borun is a small hunched over being that walks on all fours over taking a bipedal stance like most humans, his teeth have grown somewhat feral and sharp, and they have grown out of place in some areas making is jaw an absolute mess. His skin is malnutritioned and having a hard time clinging to his body revealing that threads that lie under his tortured body. He is covered in scars from the time Earth Grudge Fear was implanted into his body, his nails are long and sharp like claws and his wrist and ankles have cuffs with broken chains dangling from them, he wears a pair of tattered red shorts. In general he could be compared to a feral beast escaped from his imprisonment.





Personality: Borun is a lonely creature and a somewhat obedient one who listens to Antler, the only person he answers too is Antler, the only person who can give him orders is Antler. He hates being in the presence of humans as they treat him bad, look at him in disgust and want to put him in a cage sealed away from the world. Despite his looks he is capable of English speech and is even a sort of cunning in a way but over all Antler is the thinker of the two.

Antler is the other presence in Borun’s mind he takes the form of a tall slender beast with hoofed feet but human hands, he has brown fur and his face is an exposed skull with large Antlers coming from them hence the name Antler. He is a smart being who instructs Borun what to do in most situations, Borun is the slave and Antler is the master.He is skeptical and curious about humans and likes to learn about them despite Borun’s hate for them, particularly their anatomy though. He is clearly aware of Borun’s inherited Earth Grudge Fear knows both how to use it’s power to the fullest extent and what is capable of. Antler wishes to be the oppressor of humans, but first he needs to find a way to escape his imprisonment inside the mind of this slave. This is the mind people don’t see however as this being resides in Borun’s mind, Borun is the only personality people outside of his head deal with. With the exception of the Yamanaka clan or other mind infiltration users

Likes: Borun likes to be alone, humans are full of hatred and despise and only want to shackle him. he enjoys attempting to fill his never ending hunger with any form of life whether it is animals or other humans, he is a simple beast with a simple mind.

Antler on the other hand likes observing human behaviour something about them... intrigues him, he often gets Borun to observe them and sometimes interact with them to satisfy his curiosity despite knowing Boruns dislike towards other humans. He would also like to escape this wretched mind of Borun and become a physical entity in the world so he can hand out judgement to the human race as a God

Dislikes: Borun hates being around Humans, especially ones from his clan as their only intention is to trap him in a box. Borun as just mentioned hates being trapped in a cage or box and lashes out wildly at any attempt made to do so.

Antler dislikes being trapped in this simple beasts mind, though is content to stay put until he can escape so long as Borun is willing to obey him. He also dislikes it when Borun mutilates the corpses of humans as it ruins being able to look at the anatomy of the animal he is most curious about in this world.

Motivations: Borun’s motications are simple, to survive like any simple minded beast. He also wishes to escape the clutches of Antler despite his current content to obey his commands, he wishes not to make Antler angry until he can be sure that he can rid his mind of him forever and truly be free with no one able to cage him again.

Antler wishes to escape the clutches of the beasts mind so he can walk the earth, he manipulates Borun to do his bidding in hopes of finding a way to force his mind into a body he can control, or find a way to create his own vessel that he can command without being forced to control another being

Fears: Borun fears being trapped forever in a cage until the day he dies and spirals into immense rage if he is trapped by anything usually killing anything near by before making his escape. He is also scared of fighting despite his looks and his spouts of unquenchable rage as it hurts him and Borun dislikes being in pain.

Antler isn’t really afraid of anything but is concerned of one thing, and that is that Borun finding a way to exile him from the beasts mind, if Borun does that then Antler will cease to exist and his goal of ruling mankind would be destroyed along with him

History:

The ritual began, a subdued child taken apart. The pieces placed around the torso in accordance to where they originally belonged. The clan elders were performing their sacred ceremony, the implant of Earth Grudge Fear into a new born child. Something everyone in the clan had performed on them, and no one had a say in it. The threads carefully woven into his system, before sewing the body gently back together, like creating a demon. That’s all the clan was though, demons. Self centered beings that only want power and money, greed at it’s finest

Hatred is all anyone felt around here, walking around the clans camp was unnerving. Everyone watching each other incase someone stabs you in the back, and it happened. Jealousy came forth and somebody would wanted something another person had, before long it was gone or worse they had been killed for it. Growing up surrounded by such greed was enough to drive you insane, not even being able to sleep at night from the fear of being “betrayed” by a fellow clansman. Nobody did anything about it, “accidents” were common here. What drilled the irritation of this place home though was how people outside the clan reacted, everyone looked like walking mannequins and normal people were disgusted by it. Borun hated everything about his people, he hated their greed, he hated what they did to his body, he hated even the people who had nothing to do with it. He decided he wanted out.

He began to leave, his few belongings in a bag placed on his back. Though he didn’t leave without being noticed. Some members caught up to him down the road. “Where are you going?” they asked in a menacing tone, “I’m done with this place” he replied with sharpness in his voice “I’ll be on my way now”.

“Wrong answer” one of them spoke, the clan elders didn’t allow people to leave and Borun was no exception. The group dragged him back to the clan camp by force, the elders would decide his punishment. He sat being watched, to make sure he didn’t make a run for it while the elders mumbled between themselves. Finally one of them spoke up “We can’t risk you leaving here and giving away our clans secret ritual, it’s just unacceptable. As such we have settled on a suitable punishment, you are to be imprisoned until your will to leave has been subdued” and with that he was taken away underground, secured and chained by every limb to the stone wall, placed in a cage to be trapped until he gave in.

Weeks. No, months or maybe even years. Borun didn’t know anymore, days just melted together his will corroding into stubbornness. The darkness was getting to him, his internal body clock ceasing function long ago. A voice in the dark mumbled to him, “Ki.......em” Borun couldn’t make out what it was saying, and before long his focus fell off from it.

It was getting to him, he body seemed to be falling apart from lack of vitamins the body needed. It was hard to concentrate, his mind just fell blank most of the time. The voice from long ago spoke again “It’s si.....le.....jus.....ave, get up and walk out” it was clearer this time then before. Get up? Walk out? this person obviously couldn’t see his predicament.

Years flew by, Borun couldn’t really be called human anymore. You couldn’t really of called him human before but now he made his clan look like any other being. The voice spoke occasionally, it seems the more he lost his mind, the more sanity slipped his grasp the clearer the voice became. A figure in the dark emerged forth, Borun could make out vaguely what he was staring at. The figure was a tall slender man, no? his shape didn’t seem human. Borun could make out protrusions from his head, horns maybe? the figure sat in front of him. Borun spoke first, “Who, are... you? Are you the one... Who has been speaking ... To me?”

The being chuckled with malice, “Me? I am nothing more than a figment of your imagination, if you will. A part of you set free, isn’t that what you want? to be free”. “But how.... How can I be...” “Free?” the figure interrupted “Like I've been saying since the beginning, break out, kill them, walk free” The being placed his hand on Borun’s forehead “I’ll be heading back into your mind now” The figure dissipated.

Borun pulled limply on his chains, they were poorly looked after, corroded and weakened over the years. With his desperation building, Borun thrashed vigorously, his yearn to escape growing with each flail of his limbs. The chains gave away and Borun slumped forward, his legs not wanting to support his weight he shuffled forth on both his hands and feet like an ape. People of the clan, alerted by the noise came down to check what was happening. Only to be met by what looked like a corpse surging for them on all fours, “You can’t put me back in that box now” he snarled like a beast tearing the small group to shreds devouring their flesh before making a dash for the surface, soaked in blood. The sun burned his eyes, Borun let out a deafening scream. It felt like his eyes were melting from their sockets. He ran on all fours, making for the border of the village his vision blurry still adjusting to the light. Nobody attempted to stop the beast, they all watched him in fear as he ran screeching. As he stepped out of the clan’s camp the voice spoke up once more “Well done Borun, if you listen to me we can remain free like this. By the way.... my name is Antler”





RP Sample:





Faceclaim: Naix, Dota 2

Added an alternate version for this character, which to you people think is better. Which ever gets more votes is the one I'll write a history for. Also I noticed Ronin's likes have vanished so I'll rewrite that if he is picked

..You can always make two characters.

Yeah, I know I could but I wanted only one like this, plus I had other ideas for characters in the future and my limit is 3 for now I think

Okay, why do you have 2 face claims? Even with multiple personalities; which isn't Schizophrenia by the way; you wouldn't have 2 face claims.

Schizophrenia:

You have broken bold coding in the SCs as well.


Your word counts and such check out, and overall I don't see anything wrong. Please fix the insane spacing between the paragraphs, it's hard to read the way it is.

The second faceclaim is just for people to get an idea what Antler looks like, though characters won't be dealing with him, I thought it would maybe help.

I've changed the trait to Dissociative Identity Disorder, which seems more appropriate

And I've fixed the coding on the special characteristics

DID is fine in this case, as that would be the closest current term used for multiple personality type disorders. We only need the face claim for the actual physical body, not the secondary parsonality, unless you're going to be able to manifest it like you would a Zanpakto Spirit or create a summon for it eventually.

Yeh, I was planning for something like that in the future

Okay, when it gets to the point, then you will use the image for the summon/manifestation; it won't go in the character sheet yet. Also, I actually missed this earlier, but who gave you permission for B-Rank Wanderer?

I was speaking about it to people in the chat, if it's not acceptable I'll take it away and do something else. I can always use it further down the line I guess

In regards to the rank; I was asking because as far as I knew, there aren't any starting B-rank (Special Jounin) Wanderer slots open. If a staff member gave you permission, I need to know so I don't deny you unfairly. xD

The only other bit I can see is that with your character name, the "the Walking Dirge" part is technically an alias, which if your rank is lowered you won't be able to have right away. At least not officially. If you've paid attention, you'll have noticed several of the higher ranked ninja and the staff in general are sporting an alias of some type; in general those aren't assigned/gained until B-rank, so if your rank is lowered you'll have to wait to have it. You can call yourself whatever you want, it just won't be on character sheets/profiles until B-Rank.

That's fine with me, I don't mind the rank being lowered at all. Whatever suits the roleplay best is what I'm happy with

Alright, drop your rank in the sheet to D or C, whichever you want; and I'll be able to approve you so long as no one finds anything else wrong.

Mkay, I've knocked him down