Vyssini [Jutsu Registry]

Genin Posts : 31

I'm doing this right... right?

Name: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique - (Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu - 魔幻・奈落見の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Short - (0-5 meters)
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. On the second post (having been affected), the illusion will begin. The target must be within the 5 meter radius to be affected and once the target has been affect by the Genjutsu, they will begin to see, hear and even feel their most horrific fears come to life before them. If the worst fear is tied to pain in some manner (burning, physical tourture, rape, etc), then this jutsu will break on it's own, due to it's inability to cause a pain response in the brain.

Name: Dusk Crow Genjutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: 10-15 meters in diameter
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: This jutsu requires no handseals. This genjutsu can trap a victim in an illusion with no eye contact. Once the jutsu begins to start, the target will see the user beginning to lose parts of themselves which then turn into crows that fly off to the target. The genjutsu traps the victim in a torrent of crows, leaving them at the user's mercy, the enemy will feel like they are been attacked by crows as they flock around him or her, this jutsu can be used to distract enemy or even be used as a way of escape. The attacks of the crows leave no physical wounds; and any pain or solid sensation that is not born of this Genjutsu will instantly break the illusion.

Name: Illusionary Inverted World
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D, C
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: /
Range: Varies (Eye-Contact)
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4
Description: The user captures the opponent in a world of inverted colours and disorientating wavelengths. The vertigo and appearance of the world differ with ranking, the lowest having the least amount of vertigo and can only invert the colours of the existing world the opponent sees while the higher rankings can manipulate the vertigo to affect the opponents mind in different ways and can completely remove objects and beings from the opponents sight and have full control over the colours of the world.
Primarily used to disorientate the opponent and provide an opportunity to attack or flee for the user.
Opponents 2 ranks above the user are not affected, or only experience slight dizziness but remains in the same world.
D-Rank: Must have close-quarter eye-contact in order to activate this jutsu. Inverted colours of pre-existent world, visible waves of disorientation, distorted but audible voices from outside the illusion, can still see others outside of the illusion, and both the victim and the user will experience mild headaches.
C-Rank: Short- to Mid-range eye-contact to activate the jutsu. Capable of changing the darkness and brightness of the pre-existent world. Waves of disorientation now invisible to the naked eye but now disorients how the opponent sees others outside the illusion. Sounds are now more muffled than before and the headache continues for both parties except now the victim suffers from slight dizziness.
Under no circumstances can the user hide themselves from the opponent with this illusion unless they use another genjutsu that hides them from eyesight.

Name: Illusionary Invisibility
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: /
Range: Short (4 Meters)
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4
Description: With this genjutsu the user can mask a certain area around them from sight of others.

D-Rank: At this low rank the user is only capable of of masking themselves, and it's a cruddy mask to begin with. They can still be seen, only mildly transparent. Works better at night.
If the user goes into contact with any being the illusion wears off. Only those also under the illusion can attack but only with ranged attacks.

_{this is only coloured green because I'm stupid}

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 763

O_O Ohgod too many jutsu. Read the jutsu rules again, it tells you exactly how many and what rank you can take for free. Also, and jutsu that is multi-ranked (D-S or whatever) takes up a slot for each rank it covers, so be careful there.

Genin Posts : 31

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to misunderstand, but I have fixed it now!

Special Jounin Posts : 464

Quote :: Name: Illusionary Inverted World
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D, C
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: /
Range: Varies (Eye-Contact)
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 2D, 2C
Cooldown: 8
Description: The user captures the opponent in a world of inverted colours and disorientating wavelengths. The vertigo and appearance of the world differ with ranking, the lowest having the least amount of vertigo and can only invert the colours of the existing world the opponent sees while the higher rankings can manipulate the vertigo to affect the opponents mind in different ways and can completely remove objects and beings from the opponents sight and have full control over the colours of the world.
Primarily used to disorientate the opponent and provide an opportunity to attack or flee for the user.
Opponents 2 ranks above the user, unless SS-rank, are not affected, or only experience slight dizziness but remains in the same world.
Quote :
D-Rank: Must have close-quarter eye-contact in order to activate this jutsu. Inverted colours of pre-existent world, visible waves of disorientation, distorted but audible voices from outside the illusion, can still see others outside of the illusion, and both the victim and the user will experience mild headaches.
C-Rank: Short- to Mid-range eye-contact to activate the jutsu. Capable of changing the darkness and brightness of the pre-existent world. Waves of disorientation now invisible to the naked eye but now disorients how the opponent sees others outside the illusion. Sounds are now more muffled than before and the headache continues for both parties except now the victim suffers from slight dizziness.
Under no circumstances can the user hide themselves from the opponent with this illusion unless they use another genjutsu that hides them from eyesight.

That duration. Wat? I'm confused about that SS thing. There's no way a D-C jutsu can effect an S-rank ninja; and no one on site is currently SS; at least not until the Bijuu are released. The stuff in the quote box shouldn't be; it would be part of the normal description. That cooldown is pretty damn long for this rank of a jutsu. We're gunna hafta talk about that when the duration is fixed.

Quote :: Name: Illusionary Invisibility
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: /
Range: Short (4 Meters)
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1
Cooldown: 7
Description: With this genjutsu the user can mask a certain area around them from sight of others.

Quote :
D-Rank: At this low rank the user is only capable of of masking themselves, and it's a cruddy mask to begin with. They can still be seen, only incredibly transparent. Works better at night.
C-Rank: The user now appears as a simmer, making it easier to hide during daylight. At night if this is used small flashes of light can help your opponent identify the user. The user can now mask one friend/comrade/anyone they're supposed to be protecting with the D-rank version of this jutsu. Can be reversed but that's utterly pointless.
B-Rank: At this rank the user is completely invisible and is able to mask 2 others, one with a c-rank illusion and one with the d-rank one.
A-Rank: This rank is a moderate step-back, but now the user can mask a 3-meter area around them. The area shrinks with the type of illusion used. (D, C)
S-rank: You can now direct who you want to make completely invisible even if they aren't in your area. This is restricted to 5 people, not including yourself. You can choose whether or not you yourself want to be visible or not and it wont affect the others you have cloaked. Works well when trying to smuggle in people.

If the user goes into contact with any being the illusion wears off. Only those also under the illusion can attack but only with ranged attacks.

Not at D-rank. Also; but listing the way this effects other ranks, you're actually turning this into a multi-rank jutsu.

Genin Posts : 31

Fixed! I hope...

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 211

On Illusionary Inverted World; that is not a duration. A Duration is a post count or a chakra drain.

The rest are approved.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 211

Illusionary Inverted World approved.