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Mikado Genin
Posts : 59
| Subject: Mikado [Item Registry] Thu Mar 13, 2014 2:15 am | |
| Name: Steamburn Fullmetal Giant (Jōkiyakedo no Furumetaru Kyojin - 蒸気やけど.の.フルメタル巨人) Type: Armor Rank: D Upgrade Slots: 0/1 Affinities: / Description: The helmet is adorned with a large, conical horn in the middle of the forehead, has a pair of parallel, horizontal vents beneath each half-moon eye hole and a fang motif just above the protruding chin. The top of the helmet also sports a ribbon of white hair that hangs down to the small of the suit's back. The trunk of the body consists of a removable breastplate with a protruding, triangular shelf on the chest just below the throat guard, a high collar that extends out of the back and surrounds the rear and sides of the neck, and a large, circular leather patch on either side of the abdomen. The armor body also appears to have a triple spike motif, as each shoulder is adorned with a trio of large conical spikes lined in a row and each elbow, knee and foot carries small, spiky protrusions as well. Created by Mikado's dad; this armor should be stronger than its current state but it get lowered so it will compatible with Mikado's weak body. This armor was made from chakra metal and metal alloy which gave it an ability to convert the user's chakra into power boost and an ability to adjust its size with the user; so it will grow as the user grow. When activated, the armor will exhaust a steam and raise the armor temperature. Enhancements: The armor prevent the user to use any ninjutsu, genjutsu or summoning but when activated it will be able to enhance its user physical strength or taijutsu by +1 in exchange for consumed -15 chakra per post. The armor also give the user D-rank protection. Name: Senbon Shooter (Senbon Ite-千本射手) Type: Projectile Launcher | Upgrade Rank: D Upgrade Slots: 1/1 Affinities: / Description: Senbon Shooter (Senbon Ite-千本射手) an additional armaments installed to the armor for midranged-offensive purpose (3-10 meters). This item increase the speed and piercing power of the fired senbon using steam-powered piston. The senbon shooter were hidden in both arms and able to shoot 3 senbons at once; launched with W-shaped directions in front of the user. Enhancements: Increase fired senbon speed and piercing power. To use this item, the user must load the senbons beforehand and it takes 1 post to reload it and 1 more post to charge up the steam-powered piston before being usable again (2 posts cooldown); the user can redo the process to reuse the senbon shooter once fired. The senbon shooter can only store 3 senbons at once and obviously requires at least 3 senbons to operated.
Last edited by Mikado on Wed Mar 26, 2014 1:14 am; edited 8 times in total |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Fri Mar 14, 2014 8:04 am | |
| Because this armor is basically living armor tied to the user's body; it would be made of either chakra metal and steel alloy, or just chakra metal; which is a fairly powerful metal; that IS available to WTs at D-rank. It would only have D-rank defenses obviously; but it would make sense for this to be made of the alloy or straight chakra metal to allow it to 'grow' with the user. Mostly a cosmetic change at this rank; but still something that is worth looking into. |
| | | Mikado Genin
Posts : 59
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Fri Mar 14, 2014 2:50 pm | |
| I changed some issues also add some in enhancement. But i'm not sure it require upgrade or not. If it requires an upgrade then i use my 1 upgrade slot. Bump anyway~ |
| | | Mizuko Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 211
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:30 am | |
| Oookay, so apparently my last mod message didn't post. Sorry about the wait. The Boost for Taijutsu is formatted wrong. In theory it's fine, it just needs tweaking. It would be a passive boost with a passive chakra drain; instead of eating 100 chakra, it would drain x amount per post that the boost is active. As it's currently only 1 Rank and blah blah, we can call it -15 chakra per post while the +1 boost is active. It's more expensive in the long term, but makes more sense. |
| | | Mikado Genin
Posts : 59
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Sat Mar 15, 2014 12:51 pm | |
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| | | Houjin Chunnin
Posts : 99
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:09 pm | |
| - Quote :
- (Taijutsu+1; chakra-15 /post)
This has to be written out because it's counted a separate enhancement. |
| | | Houjin Chunnin
Posts : 99
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:20 pm | |
| I can live with this. Armor is approved. |
| | | Mikado Genin
Posts : 59
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:45 pm | |
| Slot 1 : Senbon Shooter (Senbon Ite-千本射手) an additional armaments installed to the armor for midranged-offensive purpose (3-10 meters). This item increase the speed and piercing power of the fired senbon by +1 using steam-powered piston. The senbon shooter were hidden in both arms and able to shoot 3 senbons at once; launched with W-shaped directions in front of the user. To use this item, the user must load the senbons beforehand and it takes 1 post to reload it and 1 more post to charge up the steam-powered piston before being usable again. The senbon shooter obviously requires at least 3 senbons to operated.
I want to add an upgrade for my armor. Thread relating this upgrade will be posted after the item approved. |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Mon Mar 24, 2014 11:21 pm | |
| You need to use the proper item template. - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [b]Type:[/b] [b]Rank:[/b] [b]Upgrade Slots:[/b] [b]Affinities:[/b] [b]Description:[/b] [b]Enhancements:[/b] |
| | | Mikado Genin
Posts : 59
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Mon Mar 24, 2014 11:42 pm | |
| Name: Senbon Shooter (Senbon Ite-千本射手) Type: Projectile Launcher | Upgrade Rank: D Upgrade Slots: 1/1 Affinities: / Description: Senbon Shooter (Senbon Ite-千本射手) an additional armaments installed to the armor for midranged-offensive purpose (3-10 meters). This item increase the speed and piercing power of the fired senbon using steam-powered piston. The senbon shooter were hidden in both arms and able to shoot 3 senbons at once; launched with W-shaped directions in front of the user. Enhancements: Increase fired senbon speed and piercing power to +1 rank above. To use this item, the user must load the senbons beforehand and it takes 1 post to reload it and 1 more post to charge up the steam-powered piston before being usable again (2 posts cooldown). The senbon shooter obviously requires at least 3 senbons to operated.
Bump~ |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Wed Mar 26, 2014 1:05 am | |
| D-rank upgrades cannot give a +1. How many senbon can be stored for firing at any given time? |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Mikado [Item Registry] Wed Mar 26, 2014 1:19 am | |
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