Koukotsu Kaguya [Item Registry]

Chunnin Posts : 115

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Chunnin Posts : 115

Please Ignore Until Fully fixed:

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 224

Koukotsu wrote:: Name: Nori
Type: Dragon
Rank: S
Elements:Fuuton/Gale/Steel Release

You are gonna need to fix your elements. Gale requires Fuuton twice. If you decide you just want regular Fuuton with Steel Release. I'll move on to your abilities. . Also to fix your image link. There is an icon of a picture and plus sign, click on it and just paste the link.

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 224

Koukotsu wrote:: Abilities:
Name:Steel Body
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Requirements:Steel Dragon Sealed
Ability Tier:4
Minimum Rank:Chunnin
Description: Nori naturally has steel release running though his skin, creating those black and gray colors on his skin. Once he is transfered into the host this power also goes to them, with the side effect of turning their skin a gray-ish color due to
the high iron deposits that is now in the skin. This hardens the skin to a point of
diamond, making most forms of attack pointless as it will simply either bounce off the skin. This also enhances the damage output significantly by raising the weight of the fist; taking a simple punch and making it able to snap even the hardest bones and leaving severe blunt force trauma. Extreme pain, deep tissue damage, bruising over large areas, broken bones, and internal bleeding are almost guaranteed.

Lets change the type of ability to supplementary seeing as your boosting the chakra beasts body. Next we will move on to your hardening body. If it's steel release why is it as hard as diamond? Instead put a perma-block of some sort. A good idea came into my head just now! The bessemer system! It was made 1800's to create cheap steel. It involves heating up iron until it becomes a red hot liquid, then blowing air into it! The blown air rids the iron of carbon impurities creating steel. This is perfect for your bijuu. This way you can have kutton, futton and steel.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 609

Name: Partner Bonding
Type: Supplementary
Requirements: /
Ability Tier: Tier 4
Minimum Rank: Chuunin
Description: Both the host and the Charka Beast are completely bonded; this allows them a connection that is both telepathic as well as empathetic. This allows the Charka Beast, if it should be alerted to some sort of danger, to momentarily take control of the user and get them out of harms way that they otherwise would not have noticed: thiscan include casting Justus. This also protects the user from being susceptible to Genjutsu as the Charka Beast can instantly snap their host out of it. <-- This is my SC that I wrote up with Shawn's help a time long ago for my beasts. Even rewritten it does the same thing that mine does (Telepathic/empathic bond, Genjutsu release, protection against attacks), and is something that has to be trained, not taken (IF I choose to allow others to take it because this is a custom SC that I spent hours pouring over for MY beasts, and never intended on allowing anyone else to have it without it being taught to them by one of my characters that have it). I will be discussing with staff later the training requirements for it; likely in the evening when everyone's awake and here. When we've agreed on the training requirements I will pass the information on to you. This cannot be taken beforehand, so I would remove it for now.

Chunnin Posts : 115

I will remove it right now... I am sorry.... It appears that I am now stepping on toes...

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