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Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Misery's End[Bow] Wed Jun 11, 2014 8:14 am | |
| Name: Misery's End Type: Bow Rank: C Upgrade Slots: 1 Affinities: Wind Description: This bow is a deep aqua blue made from Hickory that is covered in what appears to be tribal like runes. It is a shortbow so it is fast and lethal from close range. It is roughly 3 feet long with the users chakra as the bow string. Enhancements:This bow gains a second affinity....water
Last edited by Masaaki Mushin on Sat Jun 28, 2014 8:27 pm; edited 4 times in total |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:02 pm | |
| Because you're C-rank, the bow would be C-rank. WT items cannot exceed the rank of their partner, and are treated as the same rank as the user when they are created. All WT items start with 3 upgrade slots, you just can't use them all at once. Need more information for this enhancement. How much does it boost speed/accuracy, what speed is it boosting, and how does the Suiton chakra being channeled into the bow effect the damage output? |
| | | Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:08 pm | |
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| | | Kenta Inuzuka Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 217
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:24 pm | |
| - Quote :
- The user gains +10 Drawing Speed and accuracy with this bow is 20/10. Water makes the arrows much more durable and unable be hit off target by other projectiles of equal or less power. T
This makes no sense. We don't have attack speed and accuracy stats overall. The water enhancement isn't anything that can't be done with basic chakra enhancement, water overall is either going to give you more concussive or piercing power, depending on how to mold the chakra. |
| | | Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:34 pm | |
| How does boosted attack speed and accuracy translate into your system? |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
Posts : 464
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Fri Jun 27, 2014 7:55 pm | |
| As a bow enhancement? They don't. As soon as we have the SC system back up, there will be archery based SC's that you'll be allowed to take that do the same thing. Fix the other stuff I pointed out before you bump again, please. <3 |
| | | Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:28 am | |
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| | | Thresh Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 24
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 2:53 pm | |
| - Masaaki Mushin wrote:
- Name: Misery's End
Type: Bow Rank: C Upgrade Slots: 1 Affinities: Water Description: This bow is a deep aqua blue that is covered in what appears to be tribal like runes. It is a shortbow so it is fast and lethal from close range. It is roughly 3 feet long with the users chakra as the bow string. Enhancements: The user can expend 20 chakra to rapid fire 10 chakra arrows equal to the users rank in strength back to back. This ability has a 3 post cooldown. So lets break this down bit by bit. Firstly, you're going to need either a pic, or a better [more detailed] description for this bow. Next, your 'enhancment' is better off as a jutsu. Either remove it entirely, or app a different effect. |
| | | Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 6:19 pm | |
| It is literally a Aqua Blue Short bow nothing more nothing less and fixed the rest. |
| | | Thresh Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 24
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 7:07 pm | |
| - Masaaki Mushin wrote:
- It is literally a Aqua Blue Short bow nothing more nothing less and fixed the rest.
There are plenty of details you can go into. The kind of wood that the bow is made of, what the runic markings mean, ect. And that enhancement will not work. You cannot have an enhancement [Raiton] that does not match your elements [Double Water]. I suggest you find something else as an enhancement. |
| | | Masaaki Mushin Misssing-Nin (C Rank)
Posts : 66
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 8:28 pm | |
| The runes mean nothing cosmetic....fixed |
| | | Thresh Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 24
| Subject: Re: Misery's End[Bow] Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:16 pm | |
| - Masaaki Mushin wrote:
- Name: Misery's End
Type: Bow Rank: C Upgrade Slots: 1 Affinities: Wind Description: This bow is a deep aqua blue made from Hickory that is covered in what appears to be tribal like runes. It is a shortbow so it is fast and lethal from close range. It is roughly 3 feet long with the users chakra as the bow string. Enhancements:This bow gains a second affinity....water You need to 'detail' exactly what this enhancement does. Simply giving it an affinity means nothing. Just saying 'Water' doesnt tell us anything. |
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