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Koshi Genin
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| Subject: Hatake Koshi Tue Jun 24, 2014 8:27 am | |
| Basics! Name: Hatake Koshi Age: 13 Birthdate: July 29th Gender: Male Rank: Genin Village: Kumogakure Clan: Hatake Element(s): Main Element is Raiton and Secondary is Doton Specialties: Primary Speciality is Taijutsu and Secondary is Ninjutsu Special Characteristics:Name : Reflexes Type : Positive Description : This individual has trained their reflexes to exceptional lengths. They can dodge most projectiles with ease and respond to incoming attacks with a special finesse. Their superior agility, flexibility, and body control makes them quite difficult to hit. Name: Fast Type: Positive Description: This character has been very speedy and has ran since they have been able to walk making them a little faster than usual people. Appearance! Height: 5'11 Weight: 143 lb Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Blue General Description: Koshi is a tall somewhat skinny but muscular boy. Koshi is wearing dark black sandals with slightly long shorts that have a white cape coming off of them and wearing a padded Kumogakure top that represents his alliance to the Lightning Country. His face is slightly round and has somewhat big lips, wide but small ears, small nose and eyes and is generally small in the head. Other than that Koshi is generally what you would consider a "Average Joe" when it comes to his physical appearance but he is slim so he gets extra speed from that. Finally Koshi has a short spiky but smooth hair that covers half of his face and is white in ethnicity and is somewhat tan. About You! Personality: Koshi is a very energetic and funny guy who is most of the time quiet with tons of energy. He is very hot headed and gets quite angry when people mess with him a lot. He is basically a bombshell waiting to explode from all of the things that anger him and make him think. He is very intelligent and uses his smarts to be sarcastic a lot and be a "smart ass". Other than that he is nice and respectful to his elders and surroundings until they actually do something to him . Koshi is very egotistic and unpredictable all around just very clueless about his surroundings. Furthermore, Koshi is very responsible because he knows when he gets a task that he has to get it done without question or else he was going to get punished by his parents. Some traits that he is recognizable for is his trust and compatibility to any situation that is wrung against him. He has great willpower showing his respect and cooperation when doing missions and objectives that he is assigned making him a great team player although he does slack sometimes he does make up for it in his skill against tasks. Likes: Koshi likes a lot of things in the ninja world. Some of those things consist of his favorite food, curry. Koshi does love being active and staying fit through most of the year. He likes taking strolls at night enjoying the sounds and whispers of the wind and occasionally the rain. With that he likes to have quiet time and also trying to meet all the friendly village merchants and shop owners with his spare time to know the people! In retrospection Koshi is a very friendly guy and likes to go on missions and just have fun with his life and not waste it away doing absolutely nothing with it. Dislikes: Koshi dislikes arrogant people , badly tempered people even though he has one, and bad attitudes on life. Another notable thing that Koshi hates is bad cooking, he can't stand bad quality of things, he thinks that things should always be perfect or excellent and if not then its trash. In some cases he hates everyone depending on if hes in a angry outburst of rage that makes him literally hate everyone in site. Furthermore the thing that Koshi dislikes most is Distrust and Betrayal since his family did that to him and left a scar on him for the rest of his life. Motivations: Some of the things that motivate Koshi to be a ninja is his family's past that scarred him and made him the ninja who he is today. This motivated him so greatly that he vowed to become the greatest ninja that he could ever be since his fathers last wish was for him to be the best that he could be. But other than his life's past, Hatake Koshi was looking for fun and adventure to supply him with happiness and love of seeing the world and discovering new jutsu's and helping the ninja world altogether be a better place for everyone. Fears: You speak of fear? Well Koshi is really on scared of one thing. That one thing that Koshi is afraid of is losing his mind and sanity. The reason that he is so fearful of losing his mind is that he wants to live his life and if he loses his mind then there is no reason to live since he can't think about decisions, what he is doing, or whats even happening around him and what he is causing other people to do. In retrospection that is his one and only true weakness that could make him quit instantaneously. History:Koshi's history was deep and dark and full of sadness. His parents were horrible to him making him always do tons of work and get no brakes for hours on end and would do this everyday until one day they had died from a bandit attacking the village and capturing and killing them mercilessly. In the whole scheme of this happening Koshi was asleep minding his own business dreaming about ninjutsu and cool little tricks that he could do with it but he didn't even know what was happening until the next morning when he woke up and his parents and most of the clan was left ravaged and deserted for only him to think of a idea of how to get out of this terrible situation. So Kisho got up packed as much supplies as he could with him and started running off in the direction of Unkai no Kuni village, the main village in the Land in the Sea of Clouds. Koshi wasn't very clear in the head at the time and was just thinking about getting to the safest place possible not thinking about how the bandits could still be on the road to the village and could get attacked by them and get hurt. And you know it, As Koshi was running across the dirt path and looking down he ran right into one that was small but had many sharp objects. Now was the time for Koshi to show his true power so Koshi had ran up to the Bandit and punched him repeatedly in the gut eventually making him fall and then continued running towards the village as fast as he could! As soon as he got there he saw the magnificent structures of the village and was just in shock of how amazing it was. But from that point on he continued to live his life normally and scavenged around looking for odds and ends to survive until he thought to himself a great plan! He joined the Ninja Academy and hoped to one day become Raikage! He knew that deep inside it would take alot of work and effort to achieve such a mighty goal but with determination and will power and just a little bit of luck then he knew that he could do it! All he ever wanted to do was make his family proud and think of him as great and amazing but for now he has to wait on that moment. Koshi has got to work his way up the ranks and train as hard as he possibly can and become the greatest ninja to ever live! RP Sample: "Man whats happening around the village? Everything is getting destroyed!" Koshi said as he steadily ran down the market common street of the village. "Something must be going on that isn't good, but what could it be? Hopefully it's not another attack from the Hidden Rain Village. We might not be able to survive this one!" Moments later Koshi pulled out his knife getting ready to rush into the frontline but then a Jounin stopped him dead in his tracks making sure that this kid wasn't going to end up killing himself for no good reason. Faceclaim: http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/155/2/7/OC_Naruto_2_by_ByMaru.png ~ By Maru
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| | | Naota Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Hatake Koshi Tue Jun 24, 2014 10:51 am | |
| Judging from your application, you're coming from Saga. I must inform you that there are no 'sub specs' here on Tales. Having Taijutsu gives you the ability to use any weapon, unless it is a bow or sword which require Kenjutsu or Kyuujutsu respectively. If you would please remove that SC, then bump your app, we can move on to moderation |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 763
| Subject: Re: Hatake Koshi Tue Jun 24, 2014 12:04 pm | |
| On the note of SCs, we don't require that you have Negative SCs, so feel free to remove those as well. I've checked your WCs, read your app; and nearly everything checks out. The only issue is a small continuity issue in your history. Because of how we've customized our history and such, the country that Kumo sits in is no longer called the Land of Lightning. Kumogakure now sits in Unkai no Kuni, otherwise translated as Land in the Sea of Clouds; which reflects the highly changed geography and new weather phenomena that give the reborn village and country it's new identity. Otherwise, you're golden. |
| | | Raijin Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Hatake Koshi Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:31 pm | |
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