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Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:40 pm | |
| Free B's:7 C-raked pet: 3
- Chakra beast thing:
Name: Narra Type: Combat Rank: B ElementKaton Species:Cat Description: Narra looks like any typical housecat, if a typical housecat was the size of a german shephard and made wholly of fire. Fairly small for a chakra beast, Narra nevertheless has no fear of fighting much larger enemies. - Spoiler:
Special Characteristics:- Katon Immunity:
Name: Katon Immunity Type: Passive Requirements: / Ability Tier: 3 Minimum Rank: B Description: Being composed of Katon chakra, Narra is immune to fire.
- chakra markers:
Name: Chakra Markers Type: Passive Requirements: / Ability Tier: 2 Minimum Rank: D Description: Narra is capable of leaving seal marks on anything she touches, creating a flaming cat's paw where she walks or set of burning teeth on bitten targets. These seals are used for her jutsu and last up to 3 posts.
Jutsu: Name: Caton:Hot Cat Flash Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:B Type:Offensive Element: Katon Range:10 meters Specialty:Fuinjutsu Duration:1 post Cooldown:2 posts Description: Activating a number of paw chakra markers, Narra causes 3 clones of herself to form at them and charge at a target at 20m/s, simply running through the target and dissipating, causing deep 2nd degree burns and deep cuts where they strike.
Name: Caton: Searing Seal Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:B Type:Offensive Element: Katon Range:20 meters Specialty:Fuinjutsu Duration:2 post Cooldown:4 posts Description: Activating a bite seal, Narra channels her chakra through it, causing significant pain and causing deep second degree burns to spread from the seal, ending 1 foot from the point of origin. This expends the seal.
Name: Caton:Hot Wall Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:C Type:Offensive Element: Katon Range:20 meters Specialty:Fuinjutsu Duration:5 chakra/post/wall Cooldown:2 posts Description: Activating a series of pawprint seals and infusing them with fire, Narra creates a wall of fire up to 5m long that causes significant pain but only light burns. Any number of walls can be created with the cooldown of this jutsu not activated until all walls are released, but each wall has the same casting and duration costs.
Name: Caton:Fire Dancer Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:B Type: Supplementary Element: Katon Range:75 meters Specialty:Narra Duration:- Cooldown:1 post Description: With a loud meow, Narra leaps into any fire source except her own body, reappearing in another fire source within 75 meters instantly.
Name: Generic Sealing Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-S Type: Supplementary Element: / Range: Touch Specialty: Fuuinjutsu Duration: / Cooldown: 3-8 posts, depending on rank Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fūinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expand the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. Any ninja with a chakra specialty (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc) is able to use the D-rank seal/unseal of this jutsu; in order to use items such as Portible Water Scroll and the like. C-rank seal/unseal and above is locked to Fuuinjutsu users.
- fix when I stop being lazy:
Name: Doom Type:Offensive Rank:B Description: Death on 4th post after application. Price:Lottery Freebie
Name: Naptimex2 Type:Offensive Rank:B Description:Speed reduction of 3 ranks per post, leading to 4 post unconsciousness once speed reaches zero or less.
- Paid for, waiting to do collection thread:
Name:Irukandji's Caress Type:Offensive Rank:S Description: Unusual for an S-ranked poison in that it is non-lethal, Irukandji's caress is created from the venom of the eponymous jellyfish.Requiring a miniscule amount of venom, applied to a senbon or similar tool, for two posts after affliction, nothing happens. The third post, however, the victim experiences tremendous, biblical pain, cramping and feelings of being burned from the inside, and becomes utterly unable to defend themselves or maintain or use any abilities. Without intervention from an S-ranked medic-nin, the afflicted will mutilate their own bodies trying to cut the poison out of themselves, and even with said medic, the pain is still unbelievable, lasting for days along with vomiting and a terrifying feeling of impending doom. This impending doom will return on any future hostile confrontations with Hiromasa, reducing the skill of the afflicted by 3 ranks(Thus making them unable to use any jutsu above two ranks below their own rank) and their speed by the same. Hiromasa is, himself, immune to the effects of this poison(will be subjecting Hiromasa to this and developing a resistance in the thread where I obtain this). Price:1500 Ryo for a small vial, enough to dose 150 senbon, just a touch in the glass.
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| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Thu Sep 12, 2013 8:55 am | |
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| | | Spook Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 374
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Thu Sep 12, 2013 7:30 pm | |
| Ryo deducted for the Senbon and chili bombs.
Legendary armor approved, move your items at will. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Sat Sep 14, 2013 3:19 pm | |
| Bump for a couple new things! |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Mon Sep 16, 2013 4:15 pm | |
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| | | Spook Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 374
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Sep 17, 2013 9:18 am | |
| Manifestation of Armand Approved.
Frozen Lord's Boots: SS items to my understanding are pretty expensive. I'll price this at 30k.
Irukandji's Caress approved.
All ryo deducted, move everything at will.
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| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Sep 24, 2013 10:30 pm | |
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| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 6:12 am | |
| Bump for my village's jacket and a pile of other stuff! |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 763
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 8:32 am | |
| Generics are approved, although you're missing part of the codes on the first few. The appearence/image section is included. - Quote :
- Name: Korigakure Flak Jacket
Type: Body Armor Rank: A Description: Spoiler:
Enhancements: This reinforced jacket is a fairly basic armor commonly worn by Korigakure ninja. It defends against all attacks C rank and below and, designed to stay warm in cool weather and cool in warm weather reduces Katon damage by one rank. Has a fair number of hidden pockets and holsters for tool storage and surprise use. A good start for this; but it's over ranked and the defenses are wrong. This would be... B-rank on a mod's grumpy day, not A; and given it contradicts the Kori weakness to Katon, you're not going to get to keep that. It would block Hyouton, not Katon if anything. The materials they use for clothing and such would be flammable, hun. Unless you're layering silks and other flae retardant materials, you won't get a Katon resistance from cloth armors. Also, you need to pick one or two specs it blocks if it's going to be C-rank, or else it's not going to be allowed to be the basic village flak jacket. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 10:04 am | |
| Not sure I follow. It's overranked but the defenses need to be nerfed? Also, Kori ninja, at least per current guidelines, have no weakness to Katon, just a lack of affinity for using it. If I say they're silk reinforced jackets, bueno? If I call it a "heavy" flak jacket, thus not the weakest one available, this work? Made a couple edits, namely changing the name and description to match the name. |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 763
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 3:30 pm | |
| Yeah, 6am @@ I figured I said things wrong.
Now, unless you want this to be an elite flak jacket; which I haven't gotten to writing for the villages yet so it's totally fine that you have no idea what that is; it's being treated at a basic village flak jacket, which are basically all C-rank because they have to be available to Genin.
The no to blocking C-rank everyting stands; if you want to block EVERYTHING, it's going to be D-rank blocking; or else you need to pick a few specs/elements to block at C-rank. If you reword to add in that the jacket is made of fire retardant matierials, then you can keep the -1 rank damage to Katon jutsu. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 3:46 pm | |
| How many C-rank blocks can I have? Had already made the elite edit per my last post as well as mentioning that it's chakra-threaded silk. |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 763
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:13 pm | |
| 2 spec and 2 element, but they have to make sense for the spec block. Like... blocks Tai and ken is fine; but blocking puppetry and senjutsu isn't gunna work. xD Elements can be anything that doesn't violate the village stuff; so you're set there. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:37 pm | |
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| | | Kenta Inuzuka Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Wed Dec 04, 2013 10:20 pm | |
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| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Sun Dec 08, 2013 8:26 pm | |
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| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:57 pm | |
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| | | Ranmaru Missing-Nin (S Rank)
Posts : 234
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 10, 2013 10:18 pm | |
| Doom is NOT B-rank. Inducing a heart-attack I can allow, but not guarenteed death at B-rank.
The Naptime is a paralytic agent, not an anesthetic. An anesthetic would knock them unconscious. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Tue Dec 10, 2013 11:52 pm | |
| Edited Naptime. So not guaranteed death? Like, what kind of conditional to survive said death? Per the poison guide, "B Rank: Poisons at this rank are allowed to be lethal, however it will take anywhere from 3 to 5 posts for the death to occur, leaving plenty of time for the opponent to receive medical attention. Poisons can knock an opponent out for up to 5 posts at this rank unless they receive medical attention." |
| | | Shinobi God Admin
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| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:40 am | |
| It's more the fact that what it does/causes isn't intrensically lethal. Unless you're outright damaging the heart, just inducing a 'heart attack'; which in and of itself is a massively wide raging blanket term for anything related to a problem with the heart that come on suddenly; isn't outright lethal. You need to either be more specific on what it does; which can be anything from listing what kind of 'heart attack' it triggers to listing that it damages the heart and circulatory system; or give it a recovery chance.
One last thing with Naptime. Does it target just the nervous system under conscious control (arms/legs/etc); or is it ALL muscles; in which case this becomes a lethal poison because it would stop the heart and lungs from working too and that needs to be added to the description.
Might wanna fix the borked [b] code too. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Wed Dec 11, 2013 5:16 pm | |
| zzz. Removed all flavor. Just give me the effects I want. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Sat Dec 14, 2013 2:26 am | |
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| | | Ranmaru Missing-Nin (S Rank)
Posts : 234
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Sat Dec 14, 2013 9:22 am | |
| .-. You need those 'flavors' because they exist to explain why the poisons do what they do, and how; so that they're used properly. |
| | | Hiromasa Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 186
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Fri Jan 10, 2014 7:46 pm | |
| Bump for the chakra beast thing. Still being lazy on the poisons but with Ryuji gone I need to hunt the beast |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 763
| Subject: Re: Jenshin, Hiromasa stuff buying thread. Sat Jan 11, 2014 7:20 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Caton: Searing Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:B Type:Offensive Element: Katon Range:20 meters Specialty:Fuinjutsu Duration:1 post Cooldown:5 posts Description: Activating a bite seal, Narra inflicts great pain, though no damage, on the target and begins to attempt to seal them. If the target has less than 100 chakra, they are paralyzed by this pain, and Narra dashes to the target and bites the seal, which begins spreading a red flame pattern over the victim. If they cannot break free on their next post, they are sealed into one of Narra's fangs, able to be released or sealed into anything else she bites at will. How does less then 100 chakra mean they are paralyzed? Unable to resist, or something else? How long are they sealed away for? Does they auto-unseal when the thread ends? - Quote :
- Name: Caton:Fire Dancer
Canon/Custom: Custom Rank:B Type: Supplementary Element: Katon Range:100 meters Specialty:Narra Duration:- Cooldown:1 post Description:
With a loud meow, Narra leaps into any fire source except her own body, reappearing in another fire source within 100 meters instantly.
Scale it back to 75m or so. - Quote :
- Name: Doom
Type:Offensive Rank:B Description: Death on 4th post after application. Price:Lottery Freebie Can't auto-kill at B-rank. I believe I've said this before. You need to give more information on who/what it can kill. - Quote :
- Name: Naptimex2
Type:Offensive Rank:B Description:Speed reduction of 3 ranks per post, leading to 4 post unconsciousness once speed reaches zero or less.[b] Okay, you might as well say they pass out within 2 posts; because 3 rank reduction insta-knocks out anyone under A-rank, and even SS-rank is down on 2nd post.[/quote] |
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