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Dragon's Bite: Approved

Flaming R-Dragon Strike: Approved

Dragon's Flight: This actual range of this needs to be stated, as far as how far you can actually go with this jutsu.

Memories of Hell: You say the opponents entire body is set in fire, you're either going to have to describe how this happens in more detail given that I see nothing mentioned to act as an accelerant, or create a higher duration for the fire spreading.

Trim Shot: Barrage of a Thousand Kicks: You need to specify when you say "a barrage of kicks" how many kicks exactly are launched.

Shroud of Dragon's Flame: Approved

High-Rate Bullets (Inalta Pret Marcatori, 高レート箇条書き): Just specify when you say barrage how many kicks can be dealt.

Dragon's Sweep approved.

Put the number of times Awareness can be used in a fight as the cooldown. Also; not at D-rank. That's EASILY C rank; maybe higher; because of the knowledge of Tai and the body you'd need for that to be possible. I'll let you have it at C.

Small Price is approved.

It's like;y just my brain, but Dragon's Movement is a tad confusing. Maybe simplify it if possible. But the general idea is fine.

Qual is approved.

Adveni is appoved.

Purifier... doesn't feel B-rank; for the power described.

Aisling wrote:

Dragon's Flight: This actual range of this needs to be stated, as far as how far you can actually go with this jutsu.

Memories of Hell: You say the opponents entire body is set in fire, you're either going to have to describe how this happens in more detail given that I see nothing mentioned to act as an accelerant, or create a higher duration for the fire spreading.

Trim Shot: Barrage of a Thousand Kicks: You need to specify when you say "a barrage of kicks" how many kicks exactly are launched.

High-Rate Bullets (Inalta Pret Marcatori, 高レート箇条書き): Just specify when you say barrage how many kicks can be dealt.

Dragon's Bite ~ As far as 25 to 30 miles.

Memories of Hell ~ It happens as the contact of the kick to the person's body, the user puts much force into the kick as the fire chakra burns the user, setting the opponent's body entire body aflame, causing Third Degree burns in the process. But in order to set the person's body aflame, the user's entire body must be coated with Fire infused chakra so that chakra can transfer to the opponent, causing the burning damage.

Trim Shot ~ 50 kicks at the most.

High Rate ~ Half of Trim Shot = 25 kicks.

Hiroyuki wrote:

Put the number of times Awareness can be used in a fight as the cooldown. Also; not at D-rank. That's EASILY C rank; maybe higher; because of the knowledge of Tai and the body you'd need for that to be possible. I'll let you have it at C.

It's like;y just my brain, but Dragon's Movement is a tad confusing. Maybe simplify it if possible. But the general idea is fine.

Purifier... doesn't feel B-rank; for the power described.

Awareness ~ Ah, okay. Thank you.

Dragon's Movement ~ Would be much better if I had Wind Release... But, I can use Fire Release Chakra Flow to push Yoshiro to give him that speed boost into going faster, and releasing the veil-like flames to trail him.

Purifier ~ I can bump it to A-rank.

Edited.

My apologies for the triple posting.

Alright; the one's I modded are approved then. Enjoy training. -Goes to read the sitting training posts-

Small Price and Dragon Sweep training approved. Please remember that the word count has to be put in the thread itself; even if you put it in the title.~

My apologies. Thank you.

Awareness and Dragon's Movement training Approved.

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Training approved.

Name: Protective Tag Barrier
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D - rank
Type: Defensive
Element: /
Range: Short (0-5m)
Specialty: Fūinjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: /
Description: When a specific part of the user's body is targeted, this technique is automatically activated. The talismans move to cover the specific body part and form a barrier to protect it. The barrier can only protect D-rank weaponry (Kunai, Senbon, etc.). The jutsu was designed to keep enemies away from the body part at close combat.

Yoshiro wears such bracelets as precautions to which anyone would try to target the Byakugan in his left eye socket.