Name:God Slayer
Type:Fan
Rank:C
Description:A non folding fan,usually made of wood.It was wide with a tomoe on it,and has a a long shaft or handle with bandages wrapped around the base,as well as having a long chain attached to it. The chain allowed for a extra weapon like a small sword or mace to it. This would be fairly effective to keep foes at bay.The fan itself can be swung with Hugh force to produce,large gusts of wind without the use if chakra.Being about 3'4 it clearly possessed the size to do so.As of now this fan has been remodeled allowing its shaft to be extended by a extra 4 inches.The fan or width of the fan is about 4ft in diameter,from tomoe to tomoe.
Enhancements: None
Image Link: [/


Item: Forehead Protector
Rank: E
Quantity: 1
Price: Free
Description: The most important article of clothing for any and all shinobi is their forehead protector. This headband signifies where the loyalty of a shinobi lies. It also signifies equality among shinobi of the same village. In order to be considered an official ninja, one must graduate and earn one of these headbands. A missing-nin puts a scratch across their village symbol on these to signify their defection from that village. They can also serve a practical purpose, acting as protection for a ninja's forehead whilst in battle.
Appearance:



Name: Myriad Truths
Rank: C
Type;Normal
Appearance: This puppet is shrouded within a solid black cloak.The fabric of this cloak would be torn to shreds.Many of the tears would be located upon the edges of the cloak in all.
Since most of the puppets body were never seen it remained hidden amongst the many ninja who it were used against.Although it were a hidden bit of weaponary it's face would always be seen.It were a light brown color showing that it was created,from a willow trees wood.It held no nose,and possessed a full smile just below where a nose should have been.This smile were painted in a solid white pet,in its design the smile read that of a docile care free expression.Just above the smile rested to emerald green jewels used to represent a pair of eyes.Although they were not oval,or cricular they did however suit the meancing puppet in all ways.Atop it's head laid a number of abyssal black locks in which were tightly packed under the puppets hood,therefore never being seen by anyone but its orginal creator Kannon Furama.If a closer look were taken anyone would notice the various cuts,and scratches upon the objects wooden flesh.

Armory/Weaponry:

Name:Water spouter
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Description:Unlike other water spouting,or firing weapons this one is 
Nothing like it's name.Well to some degree it is,but not as much.Usually installed into everyday bathrooms,the weapon is simply used to spray water on the battlefield.This allows the ninja,to utilize their suiton nature's at a higher degree without needing a large water source.Being installed either in in the puppets head would be a tank,able to hold gallons of water.The nozzle to this tank is activated at puppet opening it's mouth.
Enhancements:None.

Name:Chain Saw Arms
Type:Offense
Rank:C
Description:The puppet's arms may simply flip inward to reveal 
Two dagger edged saw unlike ordinarily seen saws they required no jump start.Instead they'd spin after they are swung only once.
Enhancements:None
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Name:Yin
Type:Non combat
Rank:C
Description:A small white garden snake usually used for spying.On foes.Being around 1ft tall,and 1 ft in length it is able squeeze into tight spaces.Usually more useful in the forest as it were born there at first.Unlike her brother however she is extremely slow,and capture quite easily since she possesses no combat skills.
Abilities:
[Spoiler]Burrow:Just as the name applies Yin borrows underground.She does this simply to escape unless sight,or risk to her.


Photographic memory: Just as a camera takes a picture so can Yin.She does this by simply memorizing the image,and telepathically sending it to her owner.She may do this with a large sum of pictures,or a large recording of them.This recording may be up to a minute long.Being displayed in a windo made of her chakra to display it.[Spoiler]

You can't buy items until your character is approved. Also, type is the type of weapon, not the effective range category. In this case it would be Type: Fan.

o.o Can I have these items.

If you're wanting to buy this, then yes. You may now attempt to purchase them. The forehead protector is free; you can add that to your locker right away.

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Name:God Slayer
Type:Fan
Rank:C
Description:A non folding fan,usually made of wood.It was wide with a tomoe on it,and has a a long shaft or handle with bandages wrapped around the base,as well as having a long chain attached to it. The chain allowed for a extra weapon like a small sword or mace to it. This would be fairly effective to keep foes at bay.
Enhancements: None

If possible, can you give us an image for this weapon? What is the size of it, overall? Are you planning to chakra enhance this via jutsu, or is it a physical weapon?

You're missing coding for the Fuma Shuriken.

o.o I posted a image link.Ill update the puppets weapons at home.

The link for the image for the fan must be in the description area, and coded properly. It needs to be inside a [spoiler] and [img] tag.

You're a genin, you can't use a B-rank puppet.

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Laying on the puppets back would happen to be a large sword used in combat. The swords hilt retained the shape of a single 4in ring.A single 4ft to 5ft shaft were extending upward from this ring spliting the weapons,blade down the center.The shaft were constructed from a transparent sliver metal of unknown orgin.The blade itself however were crafted of a hardened fiber glass.Etched into the blades surface were several runes of the Furama clans legends.

You have a weapon referenced, yet none listed. You have to have Kenjutsu to use a sword with a puppet; so you'll need to change this anyway.

Make sure your templates are correct. You're still missing the Fuma Shuriken image. There is no excuse for generic items out of the item malls to have missing/broken coding; unless the image link itself is broken.

o.o The sword is really just for decoration/my character himself. o.o The spoilers are something I have forgotten how to do. ^o^ My fields for the puppet  are being fixed now,posted on Monday or Tuesday at the latest.

Alright there is my finished items list. .-. Although I'm still forgetting the snake pet. Bump for approval.

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Name:Saw Blade Arms
Type:Offense
Rank:C
Description:The puppet's arms may simply flip inward to reveal
Two dagger edged saw unlike ordinarily seen saws they required no jump start.Instead they'd spin after they are swung only once.
Enhancements:None

Right, saw blade arm and chainsaw arm are very different. If I'm reading this properly; you're aiming for chainsaw arm.

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Name:Water spouter
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Description:Unlike other water spouting,or firing weapons this one is
Nothing like it's name.Well to some degree it is,but not as much.Usually installed into everyday bathrooms,the weapon is simply used to spray water on the battlefield.This allows the ninja,to utilize their suiton nature's at a higher degree without needing a large water source.Being installed either in in the puppets head would be a tank,able to hold 1 gallon of water.The nozzle to this tank is activated at puppet opening it's mouth.
Enhancements:None.

I don't see the point of this. A 1 gallon tank gives you very little overall to work with, Suiton wise. What do you mean higher degree?

You still reference a sword in the puppet description; I've already asked you to remove that.


Make your locker/storage thread, and move your approved items to it (forehead protector). I fixed the broken [img] code on the fan; I'm going to allow it to be approved without the [spoiler] code, since the image is small. Battle fan approved.

.-. By higher degree I meant easier than creating your own water,or searching for a water source.

n.n Fixed.

Give it a larger tank, you can have up to 5 gallon tanks on a C-rank item.

Tank changes done.