In order to foster the player involvement we're really trying to keep going, we're going to allow the uses to create a pool of legendary weapons and armor sets. These will be used to create the new specialist teams in the villages, as well as be released via events and special mission prizes. We may even base village events around them.

Each weapon and armor submitted will earn you 500 ryo.~

Rules:

- Use the custom item templates.
- Have fun! These are S and SS rank items; so they're gunna be insanely powerful. Let your imaginations run wild. Use advanced releases, create insane weapons. GO WILD!
- Not everything has to be a sword. The more creative, the better.
- Images are required, however we do understand that finding exact matches, or creating exact matches isn't always possible. Find something close, and get the details right in the written description.
- No guns. However, projectile launchers will be judged on a case by case basis. A weapon that fires Ranton (Storm Release) chakra like a laser is fine, but no bullets please.
- Beyond guns, the only restrictions for these weapons is no Yin-Yang Release. Yin-Yang Release remains on the site ban list for plot reasons. A Yin-Yang Release weapon will be released by staff when the new plot arc starts and we unlock the release.


Weapon Code:

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Armor Code:

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Oh come on, ya'll normally love these kinda events. Nothing, from anyone? Remember, you create it, and you get first dibs on it.

(This is my first try making any weapon, so bear with me here.) xD

Name: The Dragon's Skullcleaver

Type: Battle Axe

Rank: SS

Description: The Dragon's Skullcleaver is said to be a living weapon with tremendous pools of chakra. To one, it may simply look like a War Axe with a dark tone, but the weapon was said to be forged by the great Sage of Six Paths himself. It chooses it's owner and when it does, it appears very light, but when someone tries to wield it for themselves who it does not choose, it intensifies it's gravitational force and does not allow anyone else to wield it unless it chooses otherwise.

Enhancements: The Axe can be thrown and return to the same exact point from which it was thrown and can return to the user when commanded. It can also be used in a similar technique as the Flying Thunder God Technique, as it is bonded with it's user's chakra, their chakra's become one, which allows the user to transport themselves to a given marked location instantaneously. This axe actually feeds off it's owner's chakra supply when in use, but it does offer a massive supply. It takes away -20 chakra every 2 posts and it holds almost 1000 chakra. It becomes affiliated with it's wielder's elemental release, allowing it to be a force to be reckoned with in the right hands. Though the weapon itself is invincible, it's attack aren't. They can be blocked by a few A-Rank attacks, and most S-Rank attacks.

Name: Amazonian's Grace
Type: Tiara and Gauntlets
Rank: A
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Chakra cost during cooldown: 5 per post

Description: These ancient pieces of armor were once long lost to the wars of time. They were believed to have been worn by the first shinobi and were the objects of great victory in past wars. The ancient scrolls say that the wearer of the pieces would be surrounded by a blinding golden light which would make the user into a god. We believe, however, that these pieces just act as a short burst shield but aside from that they are just accessories.

Enhancements: These pieces of armor each gather chakra from the user over time until they have the max capacity they can hold. The chakra is stored until the user is about to take a heavy blow. When this happens, the chakra in gauntlets and in the tiara all release at once, creating a shield of energy that surrounds the users body. The energy shield is strongest at the users chest and weakest at the top of the head and at the bottom of the feet and it only lasts 2 seconds (1 post). The energy shield is nearly indestructible and can get the user out of nearly any tricky situation, however, once used the armor will begin to re-drain chakra without the users will. This armor can block attacks up to that of A rank, however at S and above the shield will break. It will however absorb some impact.

Drawback: The user cannot control the rate of which the armor drains their chakra. If the user runs out of chakra the user must remove the armor will not stop draining the chakra. The other drawback is that the user cannot control when the armor activates. It will only activate if the user is in danger of a powerful attack.. D and C rank attacks will not activate this armor. It also does not protect against genjutsu's.

Wonder Woman... love it. xD Okay, you need to state the chakra drain you've mentioned; unless it's so small that it's negligible, at which point you need to state a cooldown/recharge time for the shield. How much damage can it block; number/rank of jutsu/specs etc.

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Name: The Dragon's Skullcleaver
Type: Battle Axe
Rank: SS
Description: The Dragon's Skullcleaver is said to be a living weapon with tremendous pools of chakra. To one, it may simply look like a War Axe with a dark tone, but the weapon was said to be forged by the great Sage of Six Paths himself. It chooses it's owner and when it does, it appears very light, but when someone tries to wield it for themselves who it does not choose, it intensifies it's gravitational force and does not allow anyone else to wield it unless it chooses otherwise.
Enhancements: The Axe can be thrown and come back on it's own as long as it doesn't lodge itself into anything. This sword actually feeds off it's owner's chakra supply when in use, but it does offer a massive supply. It becomes affiliated with it's wielder's elemental release, allowing it to be a force to be reckoned with in the right hands.

A very good start, Shinji. Very good. However, for what this is right now, you're safely in A-rank territory, not SS. As for the returning aspect; does it have a limit? Like, can it only return to the user within a certain area, or is it like Thor's Hammer and will return from any point in existence so long as it is able too? When you say that it has it's own chakra pool; what exactly does that power, and how much of a pool does it have to draw from? How much does it drain from the user?

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Name: Amazonian's Grace
Type: Tiara and Gauntlets
Rank: A
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Chakra cost during cooldown: 5 per post

Description: These ancient pieces of armor were once long lost to the wars of time. They were believed to have been worn by the first shinobi and were the objects of great victory in past wars. The ancient scrolls say that the wearer of the pieces would be surrounded by a blinding golden light which would make the user into a god. We believe, however, that these pieces just act as a short burst shield but aside from that they are just accessories.

Enhancements: These pieces of armor each gather chakra from the user over time until they have the max capacity they can hold. The chakra is stored until the user is about to take a heavy blow. When this happens, the chakra in gauntlets and in the tiara all release at once, creating a shield of energy that surrounds the users body. The energy shield is strongest at the users chest and weakest at the top of the head and at the bottom of the feet and it only lasts 2 seconds (1 post). The energy shield is nearly indestructible and can get the user out of nearly any tricky situation, however, once used the armor will begin to re-drain chakra without the users will. This armor can block attacks up to that of A rank, however at S and above the shield will break. It will however absorb some impact.

Drawback: The user cannot control the rate of which the armor drains their chakra. If the user runs out of chakra the user must remove the armor will not stop draining the chakra. The other drawback is that the user cannot control when the armor activates. It will only activate if the user is in danger of a powerful attack.. D and C rank attacks will not activate this armor. It also does not protect against genjutsu's.

This is better; but still needs work. Given this is a tiara, and it has chakra abilities, it actually would make sense that it blocks Genjutsu. Will is block ALL attacks up to A-rank, or only specific attacks? How much damage will it absorb before it breaks against S/SS jutsu? Again, what's the chakra drain; is it enough to actually be noticeable, at which point that needs to be stated in the "-X per chakra per post" format, or it stated outright that the drain is negligible. Overall, this really should get boosted to S-rank; since it's blocking up to A-rank damage right now, and for the most part you can only get away with complete blocking of attacks one rank below the armor; or a set number equal to the armor rank; even for legendary gear.

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Enhancements: The Axe can be thrown and return to the same exact point from which it was thrown and can return to the user when commanded. It can also be used in a similar technique as the Flying Thunder God Technique, as it is bonded with it's user's chakra, their chakra's become one, which allows the user to transport themselves to a given marked location instantaneously. This axe actually feeds off it's owner's chakra supply when in use, but it does offer a massive supply. It takes away -20 chakra every 2 posts and it holds almost 1000 chakra. It becomes affiliated with it's wielder's elemental release, allowing it to be a force to be reckoned with in the right hands. Though the weapon itself is invincible, it's attack aren't. They can be blocked by a few A-Rank attacks, and most S-Rank attacks.

The Flying Thunder God part can be worked with; however you won't be able to spam it constantly. No item can have 1000 chakra of it's own. That's damn near the maximum cap for ninja themselves; your weapon would have more chakra than it's owner. That is an instant no. If it's draining an even number, then state the drain per 1 post; in this case -10, which is legit when using the active abilities. If the only active ability is the FTG ability, then you would only ping the drain the turn that the ability is used. No weapon is 'invincible'; all have some sort of weakness. Just take that line out entirely; it's redundant to say that the weapon can't be beat but the ninja can; because unless the weapon is capable of acting on it's own without a wielder, then it's not invincible.

Name: The Evoker's Pipe
Type: Instrument
Rank: SS

Description:
The Evoker's Pipe is an ancient summoning instrument, a tool that was used in the past by the greatest of Kuchiyose users in order to aid in their chakra maintenance throughout long battles. A delicate-looking instrument, it is crafted of a single piece of wood, looking almost like a branch from a tree. Closer inspection, however, shows that it is human-crafted and well-treated, the bark covering as smooth as polished metal. The main body of the flute extends about a foot and a half in length, small holes drilled into it for the fingers to cover and alter the notes coming from it. Near the far end from the mouthpiece, an extension of the initial “branch” twists out and around, leading up to a beautiful carved blossom of ivory painted with painstaking detail to make it look as though it were a true flower. Wrapped around the pipe is a ribbon of fine blue silk, woven with chakra-infused strands so that it may never wear away or become dirtied. This ribbon hangs off the far end of the flute, just below the blossom, and from it hangs a small charm that is said to have been put in place by the first summoner himself.

The music of this flute is said to be unearthly, and yet the most beautiful sounds to be made upon the earth. Few can contest this claim when they are enraptured by the haunting tone of this instrument, and it is said that the user can use its melodies to call out to those bound to them, drawing them forth to the user's location. The music is said to be so powerful that once heard, those who are called by it will not leave until the user wills it, the song capturing the very essence of their presence and binding them to it until its enchantment ends.


Enhancements:
The pipe has but one purpose, and that is to augment the ability of summoners. Normally, Kuchiyose techniques form a temporary summoning, pulling the summoned beast to the user's location and maintaining their existence in that spot through the use of the user's chakra. This pipe, however, bypasses that process completely; using the user's chakra to create a more permanent bridge, it goes beyond the temporary summoning and works almost like a transportation technique, anchoring the summon's presence through its mere existence. Mechanically, the wielder of this pipe may summon any of their summons up to S-rank for double the initial cost, but from that point on, the summon may remain as long as the user wills without cost. This is because they are not being summoned temporarily, but are actually transported to the location permanently as long as the pipe is present. Multiple summons can be called in this way.

Naturally, there are a few drawbacks to such a powerful summoning device. For one thing, the pipe's presence is so powerful that a summon called by it cannot dismiss itself. Additionally, great injury will not automatically dismiss it either; instead, to dismiss a summon called by the flute, the same cost that is spent to draw the creature to the spot—twice its normal initial cost—must be paid by the user. This means that the summon is at risk against a powerful foe, and if the summoner runs out of chakra, the summon runs a much greater risk of death, as it cannot be unsummoned in dangerous situations.

.....

Zeich.

I love you.

Give me this flute. I must have this for my summoner. It's beautiful. It's also a flawless victory. Congrats, buddy.

The Evoker's Pipe is confirmed for completion. Prize awarded.

Name:Ashbringer
Type:Sword
Rank:S
Description:A sword born of legend, only those who have chosen the element of Katon, have been known to tame its hunger. The sword is rumored to have slain over 1,000 demons, in Shinobi myth. It's power comes from inside the blade as a great fire shinobi a blood was used as the primary ingredient.
Enhancements:
Capable of absorbing fire based Jutsu, and rerealsing them in huger waves at the expense of +20 chakra addition from the original attack's chakra cost. It's also capable of allowing the user to create an advanced form of Katon Kenjutsu, that is hotter than anything of this world. The flames if shot out would be apable of melting and tearing through iron metal... Blue flames with black smoke will eMate and this rare ability has only shown up once in existence, but can it be utilized again?

Legendary Fire Technique:

Name: Relic of Ash
Type:Relic
Rank:S
Description: This relic is something of vast power. It's been mentioned in multiple history books around the world and it was known to have belonged to a great fire shinobi. It's rareity is nothing short of a holy grail.
Enhancements:
At the cost of 20 Chakra per post, the user becomes Moderately immune to Katon based Jutsu, reducing the damage by half.

I can get behind the sword; that's actually quiet nice. We need more information on the blue fire it produces before it can be used.

The second item won't work; there's now way for that to be practical. If it absorbs and stops Katon jutsu, sure; but the pain thing doesn't work since we don't have any kind of HP system, and pain is impossible to calculate via numbers.

Sorry, lol I was intending to mean it cushions burn damage. Like when shot with fire, the effect occurs it just doesn't hurt as much. Like it's protection from pain.

I was going to leave the blue fire to the wilder, I imagine a Kenjutsu weirder will make attacks and abilities based off it.

Name: Descendant of Ash
Type:Armor
Rank:S
Description: This armor was worn by a great fire shinobi of, which the legendary items of ash derived from. The fitting PEICE to the ultimate Katon set. Just wearing this armor causes the opponents to tremble. The awesome armor was rode into battle in the second great shinobi war
Enhancements:
(-20 chakra every post to hold up these effects.)

-User becomes Immune to all Katon based Jutsu.
-User gets a higher defense modifier to Taijutsu [Up to B-rank.]
-User can not be hurt by small projectiles and the like Example: Senbon, Kunai, Shuriken. [Up to A-rank]
-User becomes Immune to all Doton/Raiton [Up to S-rank]

(They can be turned off if user chooses)

I meant what does it do, damage wise; not how do you use it. Everyone would mold and use it differently, of course. xD You need to fix the image code too, it's broken.

That's all fine and dandy, but like I said; there's no way for stopping pain to be practical because we have no system in place to gauge that. If it's stopping pain, then it's absorbing damage; so word it via that, which we can measure; because everything has damage calculations and examples for it.

I like the armor; especially since it's a massive nod to Avatar and we have an inactive A:TLA/LoK rp site that this would have gone great on. You need to move away from percents though; they're really hard to work with, and don't translate well. A very long time ago we tried using them for stuff, but it got to complex and impossible to figure out, so we had to drop them. Armor that strong, with the chakra drain, could easily block:

-all taijutsu up to B-rank
-all Doton/Raiton up to S-rank
-all Katon jutsu period
-all Suiton up to B-rank
-all projectiles up to A-rank
-all non-chakra enhanced weapons up to A-rank

Take the Katon immunity and any additional 3 of those that you want, and you're golden on the armor. That's the list of approved generic defensive abilities, modified for the katon nature of the armor.

Edited the effects around, I'm not sure if the picture of the sword is still coming up for the community but if it doesn't ill just put a link or something.

Okay, the blue flame thing has to be an enhancement/ability of the Ashbringer blade; you need to write it up as such. Use this template, as it's a combat ability:

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[b]Minimum Rank:[/b]
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Okay, the Relic of Ash and Ashbringer basically have the same function. Like, the exact same function, just one lacks the combat potential. I'm guessing that's the entire point of this set?

Descendant of Ash is good now; and approved. Ryo is paid for it.

Originally It wasn't, but since this system won't work it the same way I was imagining... It's fine being the same or something.

I'll start working on the sword stuff now.

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Name:Artificial Sharingan
Type:Equipment
Rank:A
Description:An old man who dreamed of mimicking the legendary sharingan developed an artificial eye. That was nearly capable of the entire sharingan effect, excluding MS. It was created and used against nearly 100 ninjas before the crazy man was caught after using it for a killing spree. Afterwards it was taken and warn by a general. Before being cleaned and put away forever until it's resurface.
Enhancements:
Allows the user to zone in on hand signs, and movement's to learn their techniques. However because it was never perfected, it doesn't allow the user to "remember techniques"
They are capable of using any jutsu they have witnessed in the battle, but no more and never again.
[Abilities are equal to that of a three tomoe sharingan. Costs 15 Chakra per post to hold it up, but it can be turned on or off at will.]