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| Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] | |
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Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 10, 2014 2:30 pm | |
| Whoooooooole bunch of new jutsu and summon updates, bear with me. These are not techniques being learned by Zeich, just updates to the various clan and summoning contract jutsu. Tsukikage Summoned Beast Clan: - Lunar Chorus:
Name: Lunar Chorus Canon/Custom: Custom (Tsukikage Wolves only) Rank: D-S Type: Offensive Element: / Range: Long, Radial Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 1 post + 1 per additional rank Cooldown: 1 post + per additional rank Description: A powerful jutsu known by all members of the Tsukikage pack of wolves, this technique releases a blast of sound by augmenting their normal howl with chakra. This creates a devastating shockwave that blasts the victim's ears and rattles their skulls, with higher ranks of power going so far as to burst eardrums and even cause brain damage as the sound intensifies. The trick to this technique is not its individual power, however; instead, it grows in strength with each wolf that contributes to its effect. For every wolf beyond the original user, the technique increases in power by one rank, but it caps at the same level as the highest-ranked wolf (i.e. if the highest wolf is a B-rank summon or combat pet, this technique can be increased up to B-rank power), creating a low-cost but powerful jutsu if used in unison. Yajuu Clan / Summoned Beast Techniques: - Steelfang:
Name: Beast Arts: Ironfang Canon/Custom: Custom (Yajuu Clan / Summoned Beasts) Rank: D Type: Supplementary Element: Doton Range: Self Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: Duration + 1 Description: Steelfang is a unique self-enhancement technique that allows one to use chakra to alter the makeup of one's fangs and teeth, hardening them and sharpening them to the point of being like iron. These enhanced natural weapons are more powerful than normal, allowing the user to attack with their claws and fangs through armor up to Rank C.
- Steelfang:
Name: Beast Arts: Steelfang Canon/Custom: Custom (Yajuu Clan / Summoned Beasts) Rank: C Type: Supplementary Element: Doton Range: Self Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: Duration + 2 Description: Steelfang is an upgrade to Ironfang that allows one to use chakra to alter the makeup of one's fangs and teeth, hardening them and sharpening them to the point of being like steel. These enhanced natural weapons are more powerful than normal, allowing the user to attack with their claws and fangs through armor up to Rank B.
- Soulfang:
Name: Beast Arts: Swordfang Canon/Custom: Custom (Yajuu Clan / Summoned Beasts) Rank: B Type: Supplementary Element: Doton Range: Self Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: Duration + 3 Description: Swordfang is a further upgrade to Ironfang that allows one to use chakra to alter the makeup of one's fangs and teeth, hardening them and sharpening them to the point of being like refined metal, coated in a sheath of chakra. These enhanced natural weapons are more powerful than normal, not only allowing one to pierce through stronger metals, but the aura of chakra around them allows them to pierce through jutsu-based defenses and armor up to Rank A.
- Soulfang:
Name: Beast Arts: Soulfang Canon/Custom: Custom (Yajuu Clan / Summoned Beasts) Rank: A Type: Supplementary Element: Doton Range: Self Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: Duration + 4 Description: Soulfang is the final upgrade to Ironfang that allows one to use chakra to alter the makeup of one's fangs and teeth further, hardening them and sharpening them to the point of being equal to some of the strongest metals, coated in a sheath of chakra. These enhanced natural weapons are more powerful than normal, not only allowing one to pierce through stronger metals, but the aura of chakra around them allows them to pierce through jutsu-based defenses and armor up to Rank S.
--------- Now, for updates to my summons based on these techniques, since I've been informed that summons can have jutsu as well. First, I'm updating my summoning contract to include Lunar Chorus from above (mostly just keeping a log of what's being changed from the original for reference at the time). - Tsukikage Summoning Contract:
Summoning Contract: Gray Wolves Animal/Plant Type: Canis Lupus Elemental Affinity: Fuuton | Doton Specialization: Ninjutsu | Fuuinjutsu Summon Type: Yajuu Clan Personal; Offensive; Defensive; Supplementary Rank: S Description:- Wikipedia:
The gray wolf or grey wolf (Canis lupus) is a canid native to the wilderness and remote areas of North America, Eurasia, and North Africa. It is the largest member of its family, with males averaging 43–45 kg (95–99 lb), and females 36–38.5 kg (79–85 lb). It is similar in general appearance and proportions to a German shepherd, or sled dog, but has a larger head, narrower chest, longer legs, straighter tail, and bigger paws. Its winter fur is long and bushy, and predominantly a mottled gray in color, although nearly pure white, red, or brown to black also occur. Within the genus Canis, the gray wolf represents a more specialized and progressive form than its smaller cousins (the coyote and golden jackal), as demonstrated by its morphological adaptations to hunting large prey, its more gregarious nature, and its highly advanced expressive behavior. It is a social animal, traveling in nuclear families consisting of a mated pair, accompanied by the pair's adult offspring. The gray wolf is typically an apex predator throughout its range, with only humans and tigers posing a serious threat to it. It feeds primarily on large ungulates, though it also eats smaller animals, livestock, carrion, and garbage. The gray wolf is one of the world's most well known and well researched animals, with probably more books written about it than any other wildlife species. It has a long history of association with humans, having been despised and hunted in most agricultural communities due to its attacks on livestock, while conversely being respected by some Native American tribes. It is the sole ancestor of the dog, which was first domesticated in the Middle East.
Zeich's personal contract is with the wolf pack known as the Tsukikage, or the Moonshadow Pack. This pack is made up of a group of timber wolves, each under the leadership of the clan alpha, Hanshou. Hanshou has reigned for nearly a half-century without being troubled, indicating his strength and the respect that his pack has for him. He has taken in Zeich as part of his pack thanks to his half-wolf form, though Zeich's rank within the pack varies based on his strength, and his allowances towards summoning vary as well. To begin with, he is granted a low-ranked companion to observe and guide him at all times. The stronger he gets, the more Hanshou will show him respect and allow him to summon higher-level wolves, perhaps even one day allowing himself to be summoned. The Tsukikage pack specializes in Ninjutsu and Fuuinjutsu, preferring hit-and-run tactics as compared to direct attacks, and often will supplement any charges at the neck or legs with a Ninjutsu released ahead of them. Many of their bites leave behind one of a number of specialized seals designed to slow or bind prey. Additionally, they may leave trap seals behind them as they flee or lure enemies in chase, trapping foes behind them and giving them room to release more Ninjutsu from a distance. Truly, a group of Tsukikage wolves can be a fearful thing, ensnaring any prey they hunt and taking them down at no risk to themselves. Unique Techniques: - Lunar Chorus:
Name: Lunar Chorus Canon/Custom: Custom (Tsukikage Wolves only) Rank: D-S Type: Offensive Element: / Range: Long, Radial Specialty: Ninjutsu Duration: 1 post + 1 per additional rank Cooldown: 1 post + per additional rank Description: A powerful jutsu known by all members of the Tsukikage pack of wolves, this technique releases a blast of sound by augmenting their normal howl with chakra. This creates a devastating shockwave that blasts the victim's ears and rattles their skulls, with higher ranks of power going so far as to burst eardrums and even cause brain damage as the sound intensifies. The trick to this technique is not its individual power, however; instead, it grows in strength with each wolf that contributes to its effect. For every wolf beyond the original user, the technique increases in power by one rank, but it caps at the same level as the highest-ranked wolf (i.e. if the highest wolf is a B-rank summon or combat pet, this technique can be increased up to B-rank power), creating a low-cost but powerful jutsu if used in unison. Summoning Process:Upon initially receiving this scroll, the user receives a free D-Rank permanent summon to be used as a low-level combat pet, and is created using the pet template. All other wolves of this summoning pact are summoned either via scroll or palm summoning. Drawbacks:Wolves of A rank or lower are no larger than six feet from nose to tail, and though they are larger than the average domestic dog by a fair margin, they are not nearly as large as other summoned beasts. As a result they lack in physical strength, but make up for their weakness for their skill in Ninjutsu and Fuuinjutsu. At home in the woods, they are fast and graceful, slipping through the trees with ease; but in extreme climates such as deserts or tundra they are slower, their pelts not heavy enough to withstand lower temperatures nor thin enough to fend off the heat of the desert.
Next, I'm updating my actual summons with the jutsu changes. - Summon Hoshikuzu:
Name: Wolf Summon: Hoshikuzu Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Type: Offensive, Supplementary Element: / Range: Close-Far (0-15m+) Specialty: Summoning, Ninjutsu Duration: Until dismissed Cooldown: 4 posts Description: Hoshikuzu, more commonly known as “Stardust” by humans, is a young female wolf just past adulthood. While her pelt is a brown-gray like most wolves, hers is also intermixed with a pattern of small lighter spots along the back and limbs, like stars in the sky, giving cause to her name. Stardust's ability is distraction and confusion; she can release a burst of light, brief and small, able to blind foes of equal rank to her for two posts. For those at one rank above her, it will fill their vision with bright lights, limiting sight and distracting foes for one post. When with another wolf of her pack, this ability is augmented and can work on foes of one rank above her, but foes two ranks above her will not receive the partial blinding effect. Beyond that, her attacks are limited to her fangs and claws, which are no different from a normal wolf's, and are ineffective against most types of armor. Jutsu Known: Lunar Chorus (See Tsukikage Summoning Pact)
- Summon Ryuusei:
Name: Wolf Summon: Ryuusei Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Type: Offensive, Supplementary Element: Doton Range: Close-Far (0-15m+) Specialty: Summoning, Ninjutsu Duration: Until dismissed Cooldown: 4 posts Description: Ryuusei, more commonly known as “Shooting Star” or “Falling Star” by humans, is a young adult of the Tsukikage pack, and is Haiiro's brother from the same litter. Light gray of pelt but with a darker color to the fur of his head and neck, most are reminded of the trail of light behind a falling star. Ryuusei's ability is purely offensive; he can create a vortex of force in front of his head, a conical-shaped mass that is D-Rank in power, and can slam it into a foe through a powerful headbutt. When with another wolf from his pack, Ryuusei's headbutt attack is augmented, giving it a +1 to power. This is supplemented with his other ability to create small ramps of earth; though they can rise no more than fifteen feet above the ground they are formed from. Ryuusei uses these ramps to leap down on foes from above in a powerful dive, combining them with his ability to augment his headbutts, and like a falling star slams into his foes as he returns to the earth. These ramps have minor effect as a wall as well, but they are D-rank in stability, and can be broken fairly easily. Jutsu Known: Ironfang (see Yajuu Clan Customs), Lunar Chorus (see Tsukikage Summoning Pact)
- Summon Higure:
Name: Wolf Summon: Higure Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Type: Offensive, Supplementary Element: / Range: Close-Far (0-15m+) Specialty: Summoning, Ninjutsu Duration: Until dismissed Cooldown: 4 posts Description: Higure, more commonly known as “Dusk” by humans, is an older male of about two years of age. With a pelt that is one solid color of a darker gray, he lives up to his name. Higure's specialty is stealth; at night, his pelt allows him to simply fade into the darkness, treating his ability to remain hidden as though he were one rank higher. During the day, however, he stands out and is more easily visible, as though he were one rank lower, making him more useful for nighttime forays. When with another wolf of his pack, however, the daytime drawback is negated, as the other wolves can draw attention from him, and his natural ability to move quickly and quietly makes him fairly effective. Jutsu Known: Ironfang (See Yajuu Clan Customs), Lunar Chorus (See Tsukikage Summoning Pact)
- Summon Gesshoku:
Name: Wolf Summon: Gesshoku Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Type: Offensive, Supplementary Element: / Range: Close-Far (0-15m+) Specialty: Summoning, Ninjutsu Duration: Until dismissed Cooldown: 4 posts Description: Gesshoku, known better as “Eclipse” among humans, is an older female wolf from the Tsukikage pack. Black along her back, head, tail, and outer legs, but a light gray on her belly, inner legs, neck, and chin, she has a visible contrast of colors that gives meaning to her name. Gesshoku has stronger abilities to her name, as one of the higher-ranked members of the pack; the first is the Eclipse Seal, which can be administered through a bite or by placing it on the ground to be triggered through contact. When activated, this ability blinds a foe of equal or lesser rank, and the blindness remains for three posts or if the seal is prematurely removed or canceled. With another wolf of her pack present, this can affect foes up to one rank higher. Jutsu Known: Steelfang (See Yajuu Clan Customs), Lunar Chorus (See Tsukikage Summoning Pact)
- Summon Suisei:
Name: Wolf Summon: Suisei Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Type: Supplementary Element: / Range: Close Specialty: Summoning, Ninjutsu Duration: Until dismissed Cooldown: 4 posts Description: Suisei, referred to simply as “Comet” by humans, does not have any particular markings. Rather, he is a simple gray wolf, uniform in color from nose to tail tip, an adult male of the Tsukikage pack. Suisei's power isn't in his offensive capabilities, but in his speed; as one of the fastest wolves of his pack, he has the ability to augment his leg muscles with chakra to increase his speed noticeably by up to 20 MPH. As he is already as quick as a Kenjutsu specialist Spec. Jounin, this means his maximum speed can reach up to 95 MPH. He also has the ability to speed others of his pack who run in tandem behind him, using the slipstream from his movements to augment their speed by 10 MPH as long as they run behind him. This allows for quick maneuvering and positioning of allies, making him a tactical summon rather than an offensive one. Jutsu Known: Steelfang (See Yajuu Clan Customs), Lunar Chorus (See Tsukikage Summoning Pact)
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| | | Mizuko Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:53 pm | |
| done just right. approved. move them to your jutsu list when ready. |
| | | Zeich Genin
Posts : 108
| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Sun Feb 16, 2014 11:23 pm | |
| Bump for Summon Gesshoku, B-Rank Jutsu earned from the lottery. Apping it now for use when I rank up~ |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:32 pm | |
| - Quote :
- When activated, this ability blinds a foe of equal or lesser rank, and the blindness remains until Gesshoku leaves or the seal is prematurely removed or canceled. With another wolf of her pack present, this can affect foes up to one rank higher
This would have to have a set time, or else be created as a separate jutsu. Otherwise, this summon is fine. |
| | | Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:36 pm | |
| Added a duration to it. How does it look now? |
| | | Mizuko Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 17, 2014 6:56 pm | |
| Make it three and i'll approve. Otherwise it's gunna need a chakra drain to go with it; or a rank boost. |
| | | Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:05 pm | |
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| | | Mizuko Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:23 pm | |
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| | | Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:54 pm | |
| I should prolly stop taking breaks right after I get a jutsu via the lottery, three whole pages passed since I got my win and I forgot to app a jutsu. XD Updated OP with Summon: Suisei Click Here For Lotto Win |
| | | Hiroyuki Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Sat Mar 29, 2014 12:08 am | |
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| | | Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Fri May 02, 2014 11:16 pm | |
| Edited OP with new Clan/Pact jutsu, as well as updates to my summoning contract and summons. |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
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| Subject: , Mon May 05, 2014 11:09 pm | |
| Lunar Chorus needs to be ranked D through whatever. The cooldown needs to be X+1 format, with X being the base for the rank you use. Or else, you need to set a specific rank, cooldown, and adjust the damage output, because shattering eardrums/brain damage is a no at D-Rank.
Beast Arts: Steelfang/Beast Arts: Diamondfang/Name: Beast Arts: Soulfang
Range would be self, if it effects the body and nothing else, the range is always self or melee in cases of extending range. If range is extended, you explain that in the description. D-rank you can have iron hardness, C-rank is common steel, B-rank is refined steel, A-rank is super hard steel alloys, S-rank is beyond steel and into reinforced diamonds and such. Adjust the rankings, please.
Contract update is approved soon as the new jutsu is adjusted.
Hoshikuzu, Ryuusei, Higure, and Suisei approved.
With Gesshoku, the blindness needs an absolute time limit in posts. |
| | | Zeich Genin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Mon May 05, 2014 11:30 pm | |
| Adjustments made as requested; pardon the old version of Gesshoku, I need to fix that in my files. XD |
| | | Hisoka Special Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Yajuu, Zeich [Jutsu Registry] Tue May 06, 2014 7:26 am | |
| All approved. Enjoy, sir. |
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